BROTHER OH! will you come HOME? [hollow]

[ROGUE ღ]

brother, what have you done?
sticking needles in your arm
brother, never said we'd walk away
away from family
these so called 'friends'
they care, pushing your end

Hollowsight

I hate my love for you
but you cared for me
so I'll care for you
brother, oh! will you come home?
you've hit the ground so hard
it's breaking me, breaking me down

x.a cavity or space in something
x.female
x.15 moons
x.EclipseClan
x.Warrioress

brother, brother, oh! we make a stand
you've hit the ground so hard
so take my hand
you said yourself that you were done with this
I believed you, it's the trust I miss
in my eyes you wanted the life

her body x.This female has an odd gene that's inherited through most of her family. Her legs are long and slender, built for running from the fastest fox. The fur on her legs is long and silky and the color of misty silver, thick midnight black stripes wrap around her slender legs. Her paws are small and delicate looking, perfect for fast tracking through the woods. Her body is lean and lanky looking, a perfect body for a hunter, since she's not much of a fighter her body has made it easy to hunt down her prey. Her fur is long and silky, almost like a kitty-pet's pelt, it has the same misty silver as her legs with some flecks of silver-white. The thick midnight black stripes run through her pelt in curving paths, a thin stripe runs down her spine like a stream of dark water. Her tail is long and fluffy and curls perfectly around her paws, it's a misty silver with rings of midnight black, a thin stripe of black runs down the middle of the tail. Her underbelly and chest are a silver-white color, little flecks of misty silver are mixed in.

her face x.Her face is as beautiful as any other young warrioress. Misty silver is what makes up her face and most of her pointed ears. The tips of her ears are midnight black along with the maine coon tufts. Midnight black curves around in tabby like stripes on top of her head and in thick flecks on her cheeks. Thin stripes of silver-white are laced into the midnight black. Her eyes are the most unique part of her family genes. Her eyes are a steel blue with silver flecks, pale blue rings are faded in spots, her pure black pupils are sharp ovals in the middle of her eyes. A thin silvery veil looks like it's placed over both eyes, making them seem distant but they are only blind.

you're a man proud of everything
I am your friend, talk to me, tell me anything
I love you despite everything, this is family
brother, oh! will you come home?
you've hit the ground so hard
it's breaking me, breaking me down

her priority x.Even though she's blind, her personality is just as great as her looks. She is very kind and gentle to any cat, even if they are mean to her. She ignores any comments about her sight and roams her clan trying to be helpful and kind to everyone. Though in her blindness she is a very good hunter, anyone in her clan that's been on a hunting patrol with her knows better then to doubt her tracking skills. She pushes herself hard to be the best warrior she can. Since she's blind, her other senses are more sensitive then others, making her a very good tracker. She takes responsiblity when a cat goes missing to try and find them and when she can't she takes it out on herself. She is a sociable feline though she says little she likes to be around her clan-mates.

her flaws x.Behind her gentle face she has a few demons. She tries her best to hide the fact that she's blind, she can do pretty well at it but eventually they find out. She hates being treated different by others, she knows when she is and sometimes she can be a bit paranoid about it. She thinks bad things about those who treat her different from any other warrior because she's blind, she feels bad afterwards. She gets frustrated a lot because she can't control her emotions though she doesn't relieze that her emotions don't show on the outside unless she feels them deeply. Her fatal flaw is not thinking over her actions, she does things that she doesn't think through entirely and regrets most of them.

brother, brother, oh! we make a stand
you've hit the ground so hard
so take my hand
this means everything to me
this means everything to me
this means everything to me

her parents x.Ashenpelt was a great warrior, destined to do great things, he was also very handsome with his pure gray pelt and hazel-green eyes. He never expected to fall in love with a rogue he found on the border. Rose was a pretty silver maine coon like her father and most of her sisters, their trademark eyes identifying them. The thing was Rose didn't have eyes, when she was a kit she and her siblings were attacked by a hawk, everyone thought she died but after awhile with the tribe's healer she recovered but without eyes. It had been instant love when Ashenpelt found her, he took care of her in a hollowed out tree in Razor Forest. Rose soon became pregnant, the truth in her case was that she didn't really love Ashenpelt and she certainly didn't want to bare his kits. One day she told him this and he hit her, claws and all. That was the day she gave birth, Rose would have lived if Ashenpelt had taken her to Littlecloud but no, he just sat there and watched her bleed. After the life was gone from her, Ashenpelt took the two kits she had to queen in his clan.

her kithood x.Breezydream didn't ask Ashenpelt where he had gotten the kits for he looked half crazed. There was one female and one male, she named the male Viperkit, he had pure gray fur and pale blue eyes. She named the female Hollowkit, a silver looking tabby with distant icy-blue eyes. After awhile she noticed that Hollowkit had something wrong with her eyes, she took the kit to Littlecloud who told her the kit was blind. Breezydream then started to suffocate Hollowkit with attention, leaving Viperkit wanting attention. Hollowkit felt bad for her brother and always wanted to trade him spots. When time came to become an apprentice Breezydream wouldn't let her for another moon.

her apprenticeship x.Hollowpaw's mentor was Dancinghaze, she was also blind. It helped her out a lot to have an experianced blind mentor. Her training went as well as any average apprentice, what made it hard was her brother. Viperpaw always complained about he being better then his mentor and how this clan was weak. He made fun of her blindness and encouraged his friends to as well, even though some actually had a crush on her. One day when Hollowpaw was hunting Viperpaw jumped her, he tried to fight her but she just laid there. He started to insult her when a fox attacked them, Hollowpaw was light enough on her feet that she moved with the quickest ease away from the stench of the fox. Viperpaw had rolled out of the way, the fox was focused on Hollowpaw who was backing up. She didn't feel the branch and fell, the fox was almost on top of her and Viperpaw was about to leave. Then he threw himself at the beast, he had almost died before warriors showed up and helped run off the fox. After a few days in the medicine cats den Viperpaw was named a warrior, a moon later Hollowpaw got her chance.

her warriorhood x.Hollowsight never got a chance to say thank you, Viperstorm disappeared the day of her warrior ceremony. She told herself that she hated him still but she knew that she would always love him and she would never forget that he had saved her life. Sometimes when she hunts she could catch fresh scents of him on the territory, everyday she waits for him to come home but she knows he won't until he's ready.

this means everything to me
this means everything to me
this means everything to me
this means everything to me
this means everything to me
will you come home?

father x.Ashenpelt
mother x.Rose
brother x.Viperstorm
foster mother x. Breezydream
aunt x.Rogueclaw
aunt x.Rippedear
aunt x.Soulmistake
aunt x.Mirror
uncle x.Windclaw
uncle x.Blood
cousins x.Mudbelly, Windpool, Cloudcry
cousins x.Hoaxpaw, Wisteriapaw, Umberpaw, Galepaw
grandmother x.Saffronedge
grandfather x.Tallstar

brother, oh! will you come home?
you've hit the ground so hard
it breaks my heart
brother, oh! will you come home?
you've hit the ground so hard
so take my hand

her word x.PaintingPortraitsOfGhosts

song - running with scissors
artist - lovehatehero

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